Friday, November 8, 2019
Narative Writing
Hi Everyone, in Week 2 Mrs Atkinsons literacy group did narrative writing and here's mine tell me in the comments how I did out of 10 and how I can improve.
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Maybe you should add more detail in where they are otherwise you did great! :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe you should add more detail in where they are otherwise you did great! :)
ReplyDeletekia ora cara this reminded me of a cool horror story!i really like how you put in that reminder on the phone that was really cool.Maybe you could add in something more like sienna was nevia,s assistant. kind regards😄
ReplyDeleteHi Cara!! I really liked your work! Keep it up! Maybe next time you could add more chapters other than just one!
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