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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Teeth

 
Hi I'm Cara and during quarintine Mrs Atkinson's literacy group we have been doing descriptive writing and we did a story about a video called teeth here's mine. what do you think?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Cara
    Great to see you blogging again. This is a good story with lots of descriptive language. I could see a picture in my mind while I was reading! To make your post even better, remember to add capital letters. Mrs Pascoe

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